Thursday, October 26, 2006

The paragraph for shopping way

Writing Process Prompts
1.Understanding the assignment
Assignment: Discuss the shopping habit of woman
Length: 200-300words
Due date: 1/23
Narrowed topic:Shopping habit of woman

2.Determining the writing context and formulating a main idea
Purpose: Inform
Audience: Woman
Tone: Humorous
Tentative main idea: Shopping way of woman has many kinds

3.Generating supporting ideas:

4.Organizing ideas:
Map Templte:
Topic Sentence: Shopping way

Nowadays, going shopping is not only an economic activity, but also a recreational activity for women. There are three main places where women can choose to go shopping: the department sotres, the shopping malls, and the Internet shops.

The department store offers comfortable facility, good service and luxurious equipment. The dpartment store shows the latest fashion and what is most popular of the world. All articles of fine quality are very beautiful, including many band of worldwide. But the price of goods are much more expensive than those in the shopping mall. So, it is hard for women to control budget, Sometimes they would spend more than they should .

The advantage of the shopping mall is it very convenient. It has facilities such as the parking space and the supermarket. Many kinds of goods are often on sale. People can buy things at a cheaper price.

The website shopping is modern way. If you have a computer, you can go shopping at home. Overall you use the website to buy products for all countries in the world. The shopper is almost young ladies.

Thursday, October 12, 2006

A Karaoke-party

We are going to have a Karaoke-party this Sunday at 5:00 P.M.!
Hi every body :
This is an invitation letter to inform you how to arrive at the place of the karaoke-party. So far the term has started for one month. I would like to hold a party in order to help all the schoolmates to get to know each other. We chose to have a Karaoke and invite you to join the party. The party will take place is the Cash-Boxparty-KTV in Tainan. Please follow the directions to go to the place. Please see the information as follows:
  • The first option:If you go by train please go traight down and across an underground passage when you are out from the train station, you pass the traffic light, then turn left on Zhong-Shan Road.You will find the bus station and by bus from train station to Cash-Boxparty-KTV, in other words, you get off at Tayih-Landies of Si-Men Road, then turn left again, stop when you get to Heyi Road.The KTV is located on the first floor of Tayih-Landies about the corner. I have reserved the room in 705 room of 17 floor.
  • The second option is to go by car on the freeway, please get off the freeway at the Yung-Kang. You come from the New-City, then you might turn right and go straight on the Zhong-Zheng North Road, Zhong-Zheng South road and Si-Men Road. When you find Tayih-Landies, please stop your car and turn left on Heyi Road.

We have activities such as singing, dancing, gift exchanging and of course delicious food. you have to prepare a song or two song and bring a gift. The following is schedule for your reference.

  1. Party date:10/15
  2. Party time:Start on 5:00 P.M. and end on 8:00 P.M.
  3. Venue:Cash Boxparty KTV(near the Tayih-Landis)
  4. Expenses:NT 300 dollars /one person.
  5. Food offered : Buffet
  6. Tel: 06-XXXXXX
  7. Reply deadline:10/14 5:00 P.M.

I hope you could accept my invitation. It will be a pity if you miss the good time. I look forward to seeing you on Sunday....

Eleanor

Thursday, October 05, 2006

letter to Joden

October 5, 2006
Dear Joden,
How are you doing? After you go to taipei ,we could not meet you for a long time. Please send my regards to your wife and children too. I think they have a good day.
The Mid-Autumn Festival will be coming. It is very nice that have for five holiday running this time. All family members should come back and eat dinner together with us. Do you have any plan to pass the Mid-Autumn Festival's night? For example, barbecue or eat a chafing dish or go to outside to travel... etc.? I belive you will arrange your schedule for this holiday very well.
Do you have any plan in the future? Do you know what happen to me recently? I went to school to study English. Our classmates are young only I am an old student. I think it's a bit late for me to go to school again at this age. I can see all schoolmates are full of energy and youth. But I still feel very lucky to learn english with them. If you have any plan, please let me know.
How about your job? Your work should be smooth and your boss like your professional knowledge in machine. You chose a good company to serve for seventeen years. I think the job give you a lots achievement.
If you have any information please let me know by e-mail or cell phone, in the meantime I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Truly yours,
Eleanor Lin