People's sense of beauty changes with time. The ancients think being fat stand for good fortune, but the person think being fat is injurious to health and beauty now. In fact, being overweight is related to illness such as chronic disease. Furthermore, the little more chidlren are in the condition of being overwieght at present. It is not good thing from the perspective of national health.
Firstly, everybody should be on a diet to become more beautiful and skinny in order to lose weight now. Actually, being overweight could cause many illnesses to human, such as diabetes mellitus, kidney disease, heart disease and dermatosis...etc.Therefore, it is necessary for people who are ill because of their body weight to go on a diet. It is of great help for them control the illness.The effect of loseing weight is become health and remove from the illness for person.
Secondly, many young people want to look beautiful and fashionable; as a result, they go on a diet to lose weight. They seek for model's stature, because it is trendy to look thin. As a result, all young people carry out diet action and hope to own slender and attractive figure. They buy beautiful dressing for theirself, also it could improve to relationship.
Finally, it is important to follow a healthy diet to control weight. Reduce food with high calorics every day. Then, all people are healthy and beautiful in life.
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Since the enviroment and trend of the times change, it is different from before times in appreciation of the beauty.
-->People's sense of beauty changes with time.
The ancients think fat stand for good fortune, but the person think fat is injurious to health and beauty now.
-->being fat stands for...
-->being fat is...
In fact, the fat is an illness as same as a chronic disease.
-->being overweight is related to illness such as...
Furthermore, the little chilern are more over fat condition at present.
-->more chidlren are in the condition of being overwieght.
in the angle of national health.
-->from the perspective of ...
Firstly, everybody is on a diet in order to lose weight for beauty now.
-->are you suggesting that everybody 'should' be on a diet to become more beautiful? How about those who are already very skinny?
Actually, Fat could cause many illnesses to human, such as diabetes mellitus, kidney disease, heart disease and dermatosis...etc.
-->being overweight...
Therefore, there are above ill person who begin to lose weight is necessary.
-->it is necessary for people who are ill because of their body weight to go on a diet.
It is great helpness to control the illness for them.
-->It is of great help for them...
The effect of lose weight becomemore health and remove from the illness for person.
-->The effect of losing weight is +(Noun phrases)
Secondly, the reason for the aesthetic and fashion affect to cause many young people love diet and lose weight.
--> Many young people want to look beautiful and fashionable; as a result, they go on a diet to lose weight.
They seek for model's stature, also it form popular trend currently.
-->They seek...because it is trendy to look thin.
They make a standard size to buy beautiful apparel. Besides, it increase score rate for finding work and improve the relationship.
-->can you make this sentence clear?
Finally, I think the deit must make a right method to control food and weight .
-->it is important to follow a healthy diet to control weight.
Reducing to eat the high caloric food every day. Then, all people are health and beauty in life.
-->Reduce food with high calories...
-->healthy and beautiful...
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