My self introduction as follows:
My name is eleanor. I was born in tainan, but now I live in kaohsiung. I got married to my husband (Joden) in 1986 and have a blest family and breed two sons & one daughter.The first son, Addison, studies junior years of National Chengchi University in taipei. The second son, John, studies in a senior hight school and my daughter, Linda, studies in a senior hight school too. I think my children are very excellent, they are my love. My husband works in sumitomo company as senior manager and studies for a master degree in National Cheng Kung University now.
After I got married, I looked after our chirlden for ten years at home and waited for our daughter to get three years old and so that I could go back to work again. I needed to work again because I bought the first house in 1991 and had to pay the mortgage. Coming back to work after ten years is not so easy. I left the job ten years ago, and the first challenge I faced was the computer skills at work. Taking computer class on typing and microsoft office skills was my first. After my computer class finished I looked for a semiconductor company and worked in purchasing department. Therefore I have ten-year working experience in purchasing, material control, and asistance. I wrote the e-mial to our customer by English when I was in purchasing department.I must have excellent computer skills in microsoft office of Excell and Word and Powerpoint and good command of English. However I think the writing the english skills on the job is important. I make up my mind to attend to the college of test this time. My second job at present is at the employment service center in tainan, therefore, I have to drive from kaohsiung to tainan every day. I hurry up to go to school when I am duty off at 5:30. It spend 35 minute from work place to school. It is very busy for me in the future.
I graduated from industrial manager faculty of Southern Taiwan of technology college for a long time. This is my first time in university after twenty years and major in Englis in order to learning language ability. Proficiency in Englis skills, especially writing, conversation and listining is very important at the present time. Now that I have started class and find out I am a older student in the class. All the schoolmates are very young, only I and kim look older. However, I am very motivated to learn English well. I think learning english is worth the hard work. I am willing to devote all energies to complete all the tasks. I am sure you can! keep on the good work!.
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Hello Elenor
Well done! Some comments:
1.I born in taiwan, but locate and live in kaohsiung now
-->I was born in Taiwan, but now I live in Kaohsiung.
2.I marry with my
-->I got married to my husband (his name)in ...
3.The first son, Addison, study junior years of National Chengchi University in taipei. The second son, John, study a senior hight school and my daughter, Linda, study senior hight school too.
-->studies...studies in a senior high school ...studies in...
4.I think my children are very excellent that is my love
-->..., they are my love.
5.My husband work in sumitomo company as senior manager and study MASTER of National Cheng Kung University now.
-->works...studies for a master degree in ...
6. After I got married, I look after our chirlden for ten years at home and wait our daughter three years old and just work the job begin, because of I buy the first house in 1991 and must pay a lot of debt of house.
-->past tense
-->looked after...waited for our daughter to get three years old so that I could go back to work again. I needed to work again becuase I bought the first house in 1991 and had to pay the mortgage.
7. It is my trouble to come back to work.
-->Coming back to work after ten years is not so easy.
8.I leave the job ten years then the first I can not use the computer skills.
-->I left ...ten years ago, and the first challenge I faced was the requirement of computer skills at work.
9. I thinkI go to computer company to learn the base typ-writer and microsoft office that is my first assignment.
-->Taking computer class on typing and mircosoft office skills was my first
10. After my computer class finish I look for a semiconductor company and work in purchasing department.
-->past tense
11. Therefore I have ten working experience in purchasing and take care of position is material controler and purchaser and asistance.
-->ten-year working experience in purchasing, material control, and assistance.
12. I must write the e-mial to our customer by English when I am in purchasing.
-->write emails ...when I was in the purchasing department.
13.The second job of employment service center in tainan is my work at present and must drive from kaohsiung to tainan every day.
-->My second job at present is at the employment service center in Tainan, therefore, I have to drive...
14. I am out of school from industrial manager faculty of Southern Taiwan of technology college for a long time.
-->I graduated from ...
15. It is good command of Englis is very important in the times. Specially in the writing and conversation and listen.
-->Proficiency in English skills, especially writing, conversation and listning, is very important at the present time.
16. All schoolmate is very young, only I and kim is old.
-->All the schoolmates are...only I and Kim look older.
17. But I have very large earnest attitude to learn our all classes.
-->However, I am very motivated to learn English well.
18. I think it is worth even though learning english is very hard.
-->...learning English is worth the hard work.
check 'worth'
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/define.asp?key=91539&dict=CALD
19. I am willing to devote all energies to the finishing them.
-->to complete all the tasks.
20. I hope that I and all classmates could get the bachelor degree after two years.
-->I am sure you can! Keep on the good work!
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