Shopping habit of women
Nowadays, going shopping is usually a recreational activity for women. Because by nature women love being beautiful. They will, moreover, choose beautiful dress, pearls and jewels, cosmetics and handbag... etc. to follow the most up-to-date fashion every day. The women often talk about shopping together. So, women spend time going window-shopping at the Department stores and Shopping malls on holiday or weekdays. They are expense for satisfied request or desire. They form the shopping habit in their life.
First, the women go to shopping on holiday or weekdays/regular hours. The working women always like to go shopping together with their good friends at holidays or vacation. And they buy many pretty goods every time. In addition, the housewives is at home whole day. Therefore they have much more time to spend on shopping.
Aside from time, there are three main places where women can choose to go to shopping :the department stores,the shopping malls, and the Internet shops. The department store offers comfortable facility, good service and luxurious equipment. The dpartment store shows the latest fashion and what is most popular of the world. All articles of fine quality are very beautiful, including many brands of worldwide. But the price of goods are much more expensive than those in the shopping mall. So, it is hard for women to control budget, Sometimes they would spend more than they should .The advantage of the shopping mall is it very convenient. It has facilities such as the parking space and the supermarket. Many kinds of goods are often on sale. People can buy things at a cheaper price.The website shopping is modern way. If you have a computer, you can go shopping at home. Overall you use the website to buy products from any countries in the world. The online shoppers are almost young ladies.
Finally, for many women, purchasing goods give them a great sense of pleasure. However, at the same time, the expense can be huge. Therefore some women usually pay the money by the credit card use. Maybe sometimes the decision to buy the goods is base on their requirement, but sometimes they just want to fulfill their desire. So, in the end, some women may may spend more than what they should.
Shopping is a recreation activity for women.They prefer to go with the stream. So, they like the action of shopping and dress up to become beautiful women every day.
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Because the women's nature is loving beauty.
-->Becuase by nature women love being beautiful.
They are, moreover, choose beautiful dress, pearls and jewels, cosmetics and handbag... etc. to array in fashion every day.
--> They will, moreover, choose....to follow the most up-to- date fashion
The women often talk about the thing together
-->Women often talk about shopping...
So, the women use time to go window -shopping and expense in order to request or desire.
-->So, women spend time going window-shopping.
in order to request or desire.
-->?? what do you mean?
In the end of your first paragraph, you can talk about what you will duscuss later in the following paragraphs. For example, you can write: Women's shopping habits will be discussed in terms of time, place, money in the following paragraphs.
The work of women always like to shopping together -->working women
...like to go shopping...
normal times-->weekdays/ regular hours
materfamilias -->housewives (a commonly used word)
Therefore they have many normal times go to shopping-->they have much more time to spend on shopping.
Not only the times are enough, but also there are three main places where women can choose to go to shopping
-->Aside from time, there are three...
many band of -->many brands...
buy products for all countries in the world.-->from any...
The shopper is almost young ladies.
-->The online shoppers are...
-->The third paragraph about shopping place is very good!
Finally, the women's get the new goods to make it a pleasure.
-->for many women, purchasing goods give them a great sense of pleasure.
But they must pay the expense too big.
-->However, at the same time, the expense can be huge.
Maybe they buy the goods base on their requirement, but sometimes they just assuage their desire.
-->maybe sometimes the decision to buy the goods is based ...they just
want to (fulfill) their desire.
So, The women will pay much the money.
-->So, in the end, some women may may spend more than what they should.
-->This is a good paragraph, too. You can further develop the ideas and maybe talk about the issues of
credit card use.
The women form the shopping habit is a recreational activity. They prefer to go with the stream. So, they like the action of shopping.
-->Shopping is a recreation activity for women.
-->Briefly remind your readers what you have discussed earlier.
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