Wednesday, November 29, 2006

writing describing people-Linda

Linda is my darling daughter. She is a slender young girl of average height. She has long straight black hair with bangs that touch the top of her glasses. She has a elliptic face, big beautiful eyes, freckles, a dimple in her chin, hight nose and brown skin. Altogether, my daughter is a beautiful girl.

She usually wear her favorite T-shirt, jeans and a new pair of white leather shoes. However she does not like dark clothes, For example, black, brown....ect. She hates to wear a dress and skirt because it is not safety device which she think. She puts on a golden necklace, earrings and backpack when she goes out.

Linda is a very intelligent and gifted girl. For instance, She gets hight score of examination at school. She is a honest person, friendly and lively person. Also she is very musical and artistic as she plays the piano very well and draws cartoons well. She plays the jazz music by paino every weekend. So, we will listen to the dulcet music next weekend.


1 comment:

Yuhsiuwriting said...

is got on
-->puts on...

his chin
-->her


Her character is a honest, friendly and lively person
-->She is a....person.

Also she is very artistic who plays the piano very well and paints talent of cartoon.
-->musical and artistic as she plays...draws cartoons well.


listen the dulcet music next weekend.
-->listen to...